野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)

今天，選擇的2023年中考英語寫作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)。

【預(yù)測(cè)題目】

（一）

1．5月22日是世界野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)日。人類活動(dòng)破壞了野生動(dòng)物的生活環(huán)境，使許多野生動(dòng)物正面臨瀕臨滅絕的危險(xiǎn)，如何保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以“Protecting Wild Animals”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 問題：越來越多野生動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。

2.原因：人類濫砍濫伐，環(huán)境( environment )污染，導(dǎo)致動(dòng)物生活區(qū)域變得越來越少；很多野         生動(dòng)物面臨食物危機(jī)；一些人為了金錢和動(dòng)物毛皮( fur )捕殺動(dòng)物，一些人甚至吃野生動(dòng)物。

3.如何保護(hù)：①政府制定有關(guān)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)措施；建立國(guó)家野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)（national wildlife parks） ②了解野生動(dòng)物知識(shí)，制定有關(guān)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)措施。

寫作要求：

詞數(shù)80—100；要點(diǎn)完整，可適當(dāng)拓展內(nèi)容；書寫工整，卷面整潔。

Protecting Wild Animals

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【參考范文】

     Today more and more animals are endangered. Humans cut down trees and the environment is polluted seriously, so the animals have fewer and fewer places to live in. Lots of animals don’t have enough food to eat. 

Some people kill the animals for money and fur, and some even eat the meat.

How can we protect the endangered animals? I think the government should make rules on animals protection and set up national wildlife parks. And we should also learn about wild animals. Protecting the animals is protecting ourselves. So let’s try our best to protect the wild animals.

【解析】

【分析】

這是一篇給材料作文，要求以“Protecting Wild Animals”為題寫一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的作文。

【詳解】

根據(jù)題目要求可知時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)；同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 問題：越來越多野生動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。

2. 原因：人類濫砍濫伐，環(huán)境( environment )污染，導(dǎo)致動(dòng)物生活區(qū)域變得越來越少；很多野生動(dòng)物面臨食物危機(jī)；一些人為了金錢和動(dòng)物毛皮( fur )捕殺動(dòng)物，一些人甚至吃野生動(dòng)物。

3. 如何保護(hù)：①政府制定有關(guān)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)措施；建立國(guó)家野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)（national wildlife parks） ②了解野生動(dòng)物知識(shí)，制定有關(guān)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)措施。

點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。

（二）

周末你去北京野生動(dòng)物園參觀。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所觀所感，寫一篇短文，80詞左右。要點(diǎn)如下：

1．有很多游客，他們給猴子喂食，和老虎玩耍。

2．動(dòng)物和人很友好，我們應(yīng)該善待動(dòng)物。

3．保護(hù)環(huán)境非常重要，動(dòng)物園內(nèi)不要隨地扔垃圾。

4．知道了野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的重要性。因?yàn)楸Ｗo(hù)動(dòng)物就是保護(hù)我們自己。

(提示：喂 feed      垃圾 rubbish)

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

This weekend I visited Beijing Wildlife Zoo. There are many wild animals there. Many visitors enjoyed themselves. They gave food to monkeys and played with tigers. Animals and people get on well with each other. We should be friendly towards them. It is important to protect environment. We mustn’t litter about the zoo. Now everyone knows the importance of protecting the wildlife because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。

常用表達(dá)

1. As high school students, it’s our duty to ...

2. Let’s start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day,every hour and every minute.

3. Love can make miracles.

4. I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you for ...

5. Honestly speaking, but for / without your help, I couldn’t have made such great progress in English.

6. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I wish I could repay it some day.

1. Words fail me when I want to express my thanks.

2. Whenever I have difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out.

3. I strongly advise you to arrive 5 minutes earlier.

4. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _____. Only in this way can we ____ in the future.

5. If every member is willing to contribute to the society, the world will be better and better.

6. If we can not take useful measures, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

7. Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.

8. In order to enrich students’ school life, the Students’ Union is going to ..., which mainly focuses on ...

9. Everybody is required to attend it on time.

加好友領(lǐng)取15大作文熱點(diǎn)話題

點(diǎn)擊下方“閱讀原文”領(lǐng)取一節(jié)1小時(shí)免費(fèi)體驗(yàn)課↓↓↓