2023高考考試必看的——高考滿分作文附解析點評「建議收藏」

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高考是人生最重要的時刻，

高考作文往往出題人很刁鉆

我們應該明白一些寫作技巧，看見試題怎么寫寫什么這都很重要！

下面是全國一些重要省份及全國卷試題的作文解析以及點評

2023全國I卷高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學習，得知當地美術館要舉辦中國畫展．請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內容包括：

1．寫信目的；

2．個人優勢；

3．能做的事情．

注意：

1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3．結束語已為你寫好．

【分析】高分句型

1．Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings， I am writing to apply for volunteering．

句子里，現在分詞Knowing 和賓語從句that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings做原因狀語．

我知道當地美術館將舉辦一個中國畫展覽，所以寫信申請志愿服務．

2．As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old ， I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners．

句子里，修飾先行詞 a student ，關系詞 who引導定語從句 has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old．

作為一名5歲就開始學習中國畫的學生，我很高興有機會向外國人介紹中國畫．

【解答】Dear sir or madam，

I am a Chinese student named Li Hua， who is studying in London during the summer vacation． Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings， I am writing to apply for volunteering．【高分句型一】（寫信目的）

As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old ， I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners．【高分句型二】Besides， my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply．（個人優勢以及能做的事情）

I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity． Looking forward to your early reply．（期盼回復）

Yours，

LiHua．

【點評】本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．

2023全國II卷高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是校排球隊隊長李華．請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內容包括：

1．比賽信息；

2．賽前準備；

3．表達期待．

注意：

1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．

【分析】高分句型一：I am writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball game will be held on the playground this Friday afternoon．

譯文：我寫信是想告訴你一個消息，今天下午排球比賽將在操場上舉行．

分析：這句話使用that引導同位語從句．

高分句型二：Only when we improve our skills and build up our strength can we ensure the victory．

譯文：只有檔我們提高技能，增強實力，才能保證勝利．

分析：倒裝句．

【解答】Dear Chris，

I am writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball game will be held on the playground this Friday afternoon．【高分句型一】Our team will play against Class 2 team， which means it will be a close game．（比賽信息） We should make good preparations for it so that we can win the game． As a result， it is necessary for us to practice playing it every afternoon after school． Only when we improve our skills and build up our strength can we ensure the victory．【高分句型二】（賽前準備）

Hopefully， we can win the game．（表達愿望）

Yours，

Li Hua

【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．

2023全國III卷高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節．請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內容包括：

1．時間；

2．活動安排；

3．歡迎他表演節目．

注意：

1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．

【分析】高分句型一：In the music festival， we invite some famous singers and pianist to perform， who will also give some lessons to the students．

譯文：在音樂節上，我們邀請了一些著名的歌手和鋼琴家表演，他們也會給學生上一些課．

分析：who引導定語從句．

高分句型二： If possible， you are welcome to perform in the festival， which will be a great experience．

譯文：如果可能的話，歡迎您在節日里表演，這將是一次很好的體驗．

分析：if引導省略的時間狀語從句，which引導定語從句．

【解答】Dear Allen，

I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school． We can take part in the music festival in the school hall next Friday afternoon．（時間） In the music festival， we invite some famous singers and pianist to perform， who will also give some lessons to the students．【高分句型一】In addition， some students can have a chance to cooperate with this musicians．（活動安排）As a music fan， you are bound to participate in the festival． If possible， you are welcome to perform in the festival， which will be a great experience．【高分句型二】（歡迎他表演節目）Hopefully， you can take part in it and dont miss the chance．Yours，Li Hua

江蘇省2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．

Li Jiang： Have you heard this？ A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month．

Su Hua： Yes， I have． Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony．

Li Jiang：But it seems people have different opinions．

Su Hua： What do you think？

Li Jiang： I think its a good idea． Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students．

Su Hua： I agree． But we dont have to dress that way． Thats not our daily style． Besides， its not very convenient．

Li Jiang： You see， its the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for． Just the right occasion．

Su Hua： I prefer the school uniform． Its nice． Its also a better display of our school culture．

【寫作內容】

1．用約30個詞概括上述信息的主要內容；

2．在上述場合，你是否傾向于穿中國傳統服裝？請說明理由（不少于兩點）．

【寫作要求】

1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

3．不必寫標題．

【評分標準】

內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當．

【分析】高分句型一：The main question presented in the dialogue is whether the students should wear traditional costumes during a ceremony for foreign students．

譯文：對話中提出的主要問題是，在外國學生的儀式上，學生是否應該穿傳統服裝．

分析：過去分詞做定語，whether引導表語從句．

高分句型二： They are highly representative of our traditions， and will undoubtedly leave a deep impression on the foreign students who are coming for a cultural exchange．

譯文：他們高度代表了我們的傳統，無疑會給前來參加"文化"交流的外國學生留下深刻印象．

分析：who引導定語從句．

【解答】The main question presented in the dialogue is whether the students should wear traditional costumes during a ceremony for foreign students．【高分句型一】The students had each given their own stand and reasons．（概述）

I am more inclined to agree with Li Jiang， taking into consideration of the following perspectives．First，traditional costumes are one of the most suitable items when it comes to presenting our culture． They are highly representative of our traditions， and will undoubtedly leave a deep impression on the foreign students who are coming for a cultural exchange．【高分句型二】 Second，attending the event in traditional Chinese dress may open up several opportunities for interaction． The organizer can come up with several activities based on the attire itself， such as inviting the foreign students to try our traditional costumes．（你是否傾向于穿中國傳統服裝？請說明理由）

To conclude，my advice is that the students should wear traditional Chinese dress for this occasion．（結論）

天津市2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假設你是晨光中學的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動．活動期間，英方教師Chris將做一個有關西方藝術的講座．現就講座內容征求你校學生的意見．請根據以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件：

（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術、舞蹈中任選其一）；

（2）選擇該話題的原因及關于該話題你感興趣的內容；

（3）希望從中有何收獲．

注意：

（1）詞數不少于100；

（2）可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．

Dear Chris，

Im Li Jin， a student at Chenguang High School．

Thank you for your time．

Yours，

Li Jin

【分析】高分句型一：I am interested in all kinds of music， among which Jazz is my favorite．

譯文：我對各種音樂都感興趣，其中爵士樂是我最喜歡的．

分析：among which引導非限制性定語從句．

高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz．

譯文：如果你能增加一些享受爵士樂的課程，我會很感激的．

分析：固定句型appreciate it if…

【解答】Dear Chris，

Im Li Jin， a student at Chenguang High School．I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week﹣long summer exchange． During the activity， you will give a lecture on Western art． You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about．（寫信目的）

From my personal note， music is my priority．（你喜歡的講座話題）I am interested in all kinds of music， among which Jazz is my favorite．【高分句型一】I want to know about the history of jazz， and some famous jazz singers．（選擇該話題的原因及關于該話題你感興趣的內容）

I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz．【高分句型二】（希望從中有何收獲）

Thank you for your time．

Yours，

Li Jin

北京市2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華．你們班上周組織了一次以"勞動最光榮"為主題的社會實踐活動．請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程．

注意：詞數不少于60．

提示詞：西瓜 watermelon

【分析】高分句型一：When I got home， I packed up my luggage for the trip．

譯文：當我到家的時候，我為這次旅行收拾行李．

分析：when引導時間狀語從句．

高分句型二：While working， I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun．

譯文：當工作的時候，我意識到在炎熱的太陽下面在田里勞作是多么難．

分析：使用while引導省略的時間狀語從句，realized后面是how引導賓語從句．

【解答】Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs．（引出話題）

At the class meeting， our teacher told us about the programme with the theme "Working is most beautiful"． And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands．（圖一）When I got home， I packed up my luggage for the trip．【高分句型一】（圖二）On the farm，we helped pick watermelons． While working， I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun．【高分句型二】（圖三）When I came back home，I shared my experiences with my parents． And they were very proud of me．（圖四）

浙江省2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是李華，經常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家．請給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：

1．表示感謝；

2．回顧Alex對你的幫助；

3．臨別祝愿．

注意：

1．詞數80左右；

2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．

【分析】高分句型一：It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture．

譯文：是你和我分享了豐富的英語和英語文化知識．

分析：使用強調句．

高分句型二：Never will I forget you and your kindness．

譯文：我永遠不會忘記你和你的善良．

分析：使用倒裝句．

【解答】Dear Chris，

I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long．We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help． I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English．（表示感謝）

While studying in China， you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English．It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture．【高分句型一】Never will I forget you and your kindness．【高分句型二】（回顧Alex對你的幫助）

It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible．（表達愿望）

Yours，

Li Hua

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